Talk:Wp/apc/مصطفى كمال أتاتورك

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Need help verifying the content or style suggestions. @FunLater@A455bcd9 TheJoyfulTentmaker (talk) 04:09, 7 January 2024 (UTC)

I manually translated it to English: "Mustafa Kemal Atatürk was the first President of Turkey. He has made many important changes to create a strong Turkey. He needed the countries (yes, plural) to be modern and similar to Western nations."

I don't think there is enough text to comment on the style. It's understandable, but also, after the first point, it sounds a little childish.

"عشان يخلق تركيا قوية"

is kinda weird, but it is grammatically correct.

"كان عايز"

is not used in my dialect of Levantine, but I'm not sure if it is in others'.

"ومشابهة للدول الغربية"

is kind of MSA. What I would say is

"وبتشبه البلاد الغربية"

FunLater (talk) 00:53, 10 January 2024 (UTC)

Thanks, this is helpful! Seems this approach will not be very productive for the time being, but I didn't want the activity here to die out. I'll try to find new editors who could join us. Thanks again for the detailed review! TheJoyfulTentmaker (talk) 01:48, 10 January 2024 (UTC)